Nothing here is broken
Nothing is out of place
Life is simply scattered
with no pattern
to embrace
Yet, if you turn your head
and look briefly at your past
patterns will emerge
like a photo held steadfast
But don’t linger there
Don’t stop and stare
Don’t meander down old roads
Simply note the patterns
of your past
and let the back door close
For you can’t control the
scattered pieces that will
fall
like
raindrops
from the
sky
Your patterns are revealed
when you tell the story
of your life
Change your story
Change the pattern
This is your puzzle
by design
You are the artist
and the sculptor
of the
scattered pieces
of your mind
“If you change the way you look at things, the things you look at change. ” ~ Wayne Dyer
A wonderful Monday morning poem with a message. I like the structure of the piece and the choice of words like change, pattern, puzzle, design, and mind. Well done, Sue.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Bill. I try to incorporate a message in my poetry but it doesn’t always translate. Happy Monday.😊
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So nicely done!!
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Thanks, Bill.
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My pleasure!
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Beautifully profound.
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Thanks so much😊
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Gawd that was good. Wise. Loved it.
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Thanks, Joey😊
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Great message and so well written, Sue. “Look only briefly at your past and take note of patterns”.
It makes me think of Albert Einstein’s definition of insanity…doing the same thing over and over again, but expecting different results!
Change the pattern.
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Exactly! Making changes can be scary. We prefer our comfort zones. Glad the message resonated with you😊
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It definitely did… 🙂
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Beautiful piece with amazing message
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Thanks so much😊
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff mate
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I especially like this one-and I can relate to things seeming scattered, yet there is a divine order after all.
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So glad you enjoyed it, Michele 🙂
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Beautiful…that’s the first thing I can say. Inspiring is the second…lastly, thank you!
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